Wednesday, October 29, 2014

"Is Google Making Us Stupid?" [Question Mark?]

Gerald Lappay

RWS 100

Professor Werry

October 29th, 2014

Stupid Google? [Question Mark]

Overall Argument: While the internet and other pieces of technology are super helpful, there are some noticeable downsides that Carr addresses. They aren't life-threatening. More like "quality-of-life" threatening.

1 Main Claim: "I've been spending a lot of time online ... The Web has been a godsend to me as a writer ... But that boon comes at a price ... The more they use the Web, the more they have to fight to stay focused on long pieces of writing." (Carr)

Strategy 1: Authorities & Big Names: 2001 Space Odyssey. A movie that I personally dislike, but nevertheless helps the reader connect to his article, especially when it comes to the de-wiring of HAL in comparison the the "de-wiring" of Carr's brain.

Strategy 2: Identification: This is a big one. I'm going to highlight Nietzsche for 1) I lost a few points on my Philosophy midterm because of this [expletive] and 2) because Carr's narrative/identification of the typewriter story works out pretty well. The typewriter helped Nietzsche. A lot. But at what cost? "His already terse prose had become even tighter, more telegraphic ... Under the sway of the machine, writes the German media scholar Friedrich A. Kittler, Nietzsche's prose "changed from arguments to aphorisms, from thoughts to puns, from rhetoric to telegram style."" (Carr)  

Strategy 3: Metaphors: Another big one. There's a lot of metaphors in this article, and I'm going to highlight a few: "When the Net absorbs a medium, that medium is recreated in the Net's image. It injects the medium's content with hyperlinks, blinking ads, and other digital gewgaws." The Internet ... it's becoming our map and our clock, our printing press, and our typewriter, our calculator and our telephone, and our radio and TV." (Carr)

Monday, October 27, 2014

Rhetorical Strategies

Gerald Lappay

RWS 100

Professor Werry

October 27, 2014

Rhetorical Strategies

Parry's "Branding a Condition": I'm hooked onto Parry's use of exemplification in his article, particularly the one he uses with Listerine. It's almost like he's [informally saying]:

      "Let me explain "condition branding" to you. You know that one product you've probably used at least once in your lifetime? Listerine? Yeah, funny story about that. Warner-Lambert, the guy who invented Listerine, initially made Listerine to cure a slew of things. Well, that was a bust. Then this fancy-yet-scary word came about: halitosis. Sounds scary, right? Like some kind of super-life-threatening-Ebola-tier stuff. Well it just means bad breath. So what'd Warner-Lambert do? He flipped the switch on Listerine and called it "THE CURE FOR ALL HALITOSIS". Listerine became a hit, and now it's in shelves all over the place."

While this is super-informal, that's how powerful exemplification can be.

Rifkin's "Change of Heart about Animals": Rifkin called upon a few big names of the food industry in his article -- and calling out big industry is rhetorical strategy. When McDonald's, Burger King, and KFC -- thought to be money making, animal slaughtering, whatever-have-you industries support research on the animals they kill, that raises some interest. It's a pretty powerful rhetorical strategy, it hit me when I first read this article, and it hit me again the second time.

Sunday, October 26, 2014

Carey Paper Final Draft

Gerald Lappay

RWS 100

Professor Werry

October 25, 2014


            The Chronicle of Higher Education is one of the largest sources of news and information regarding higher education’s faculty members and administrators. As of the past few years, The Chronicle and other media have been keenly following for-profit colleges – higher education institutes that double as corporations and typically have shareholders backing them. In July of 2010, Kevin Carey, a writer for The Chronicle, produced a piece titled “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profit Colleges,” which briefly scrutinizes for-profit colleges as well as attempts to shed some light on them. Some notable topics Carey goes over in “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profit Colleges” include: issues with for-profits and the federal government, Michael Clifford, one of the leaders of the for-profit college industry, and traditional institution’s stance against for-profit institutions. These for-profit institutions are reaping in fairly absurd amounts of money. “[The University of] Phoenix alone is on pace to reap $1-billion from Pell Grants this year, along with $4-billion from federal loans. A quarter of all federal aid goes to for-profits, while they enroll only 10 percent of schools” (Carey). Along with the large amounts of money being pulled from the federal government, one must also consider the large amount of defaulting (indebted) students – in particular, those who attend for-profit institutions. A quick Google search can quickly uncover horror stories shared by for-profit graduates about how they won’t be able to repay their growing debts. Getting out of this debt is not easy; sometime around the 1970s began a string of events that ultimately led to college graduates not being able to declare bankruptcy on their student loans. This idea of not being able to declare bankruptcy out of student loans is called nondischargeablility, and was declared by former president George W. Bush. I can’t say that we can all blame the Shrub; it’s just a matter of Bush being president at the time the fed and the banks begged him to declare nondischargeablility on student loans.
            In this essay, I seek to extend and complicate some of the claims Carey forms regarding for-profit colleges using my own speculation and three outside sources. The first source includes “Excerpts from the Government Accountability Report on For-Profit Universities” performed in August of 2010 by the Government Accountability Office (GAO); which took undercover applicants to a variety of for-profit colleges in order to identify the industry’s aggressive and fraudulent recruiting strategies. The second source is a PowerPoint presentation presented during the 2010 Career College Association conference, unveiling the for-profit industry’s new marketing tactics, dubbed “Project Rose 2010”. As a side note, the CCA changed their name to the Association of Private Sector Colleges and Universities (APSCU), whose new goal is to “develop a globally competitive workforce and enable all students to achieve their educational and career dreams” (APSCU Mission). My final outside source is another article found in The Chronicle of Higher Education written by Joshua Woods, who received a doctorate in Sociology at Michigan State University, titled “Opportunity, Ease, Encouragement, and Shame: a Short Course in Pitching For-Profit Education.” This piece briefly summarizes the early struggles of for-profit struggles and introduces Woods’ own investigations on for-profit institutions. These three outside sources not only extend, but illustrate Carey’s “horror stories of aggressive recruiter’s inducting students to take out huge loans for nearly worthless degrees,” (Carey).
            As noted by Carey, “stories of aggressive recruiters inducing students to take out huge loans for nearly worthless degrees are filling the news.” Carey claims that there’s something suspicious about the for-profit industry’s recruiters that leads to students taking out absurd federal loans. Do they threaten potential students? Are they master rhetoricians? Or are they simply following a strict script & policy? This leads to the question: how aggressive are these for-profit recruiters? The GAO (Government Accountability Office) sent undercover applicants to 15 for-profit colleges to investigate fraudulent marketing practices. “Often called the “conventional watchdog,” the GAO investigates how the federal government spends taxpayer dollars” (About GAO).
                        Our covert testing at 15 for-profit colleges found that four colleges encouraged                             fraudulent practices, such as encouraging students to submit false information                                about their financial status. In addition all 15 colleges made some type of                                             deceptive or otherwise questionable statement to undercover applicants, such as                              misrepresenting the applicant’s likely salary … and not providing clear                                            information about the college’s graduation rate. A small beauty college told our                                   applicant that barbers can earn $150,000 to $250,000 a year. While this may be                                     true in exceptional circumstances, the Bureau of Labor Statistics (BLS) reports                              that 90 percent of barbers make less than $43,00 a year (GAO).
Not only do the GAO’s findings regarding these practices illustrate Carey’s argument of aggressive recruiters, they also extend this idea by including some of the wild claims for-profit colleges form to attract potential students. Carey generalizes these recruiting practices as “aggressive” when the report shows there’s much more to it. Suggesting someone to falsify their received income and liquid assets just to gain more access to federal funds is way more than aggressive. Recruiters alluding to students that attending their university can net six-figure wages for working as something menial like a barber is unbelievable. Carey should have taken more time looking into the for-profit industry’s recruiting strategies before labeling them off as something simple like “aggressive”.
            The horror stories don’t stop at just aggressive recruiters and fraudulent practices. The language used by the corporations and shareholders of these for-profit institutions can imply that they treat their students simply as a source of capital. Every year, the CCA (Career College Association, now known as the APSCU (Association of Private Sector Colleges and Universities), holds meetings to discuss for-profit colleges. In 2010, they introduced “Project Rose”; a project whose objective was to change the media’s way of thinking of the for-profit industry. “Instead of ‘call centers’ say ‘enrollment assistance center’ … ‘prospective students’ instead of ‘target audience’ … ‘home office’ instead of ‘corporate’ … ‘salary component’ instead of ‘commissions’” (Project Rose). Not only does the APSCU’s language extend Carey’s claims of assertive recruiters, it also challenges Carey’s claim of “traditional institutions having very little evidence against for-profit colleges” (Carey). Project Rose is evidence that can be used to “question the quality of for-profit degrees” (Carey). Carey claims that traditional institutions’ only form of rebuttal against for-profits is the issue of accreditation. Since for-profits earn accreditation the same way traditional institutions do, obtaining accreditation shouldn’t be a point of questioning for-profits. Carey briefly admits this, describing accreditation as “a taxicab medallion, available for bidding on the open market” (Carey). What should be questioned is how associations like the APSCU treat their clients. Taking a look at the Project Rose presentation, there’s a range of evidence from vocabulary to potential policy changes. There’s plenty of evidence that points against for-profits that Carey doesn’t take the time to investigate, which is a potential flaw in his article.
            Joshua Woods is another writer for The Chronicle of Higher Education with a doctorate in sociology. Woods claims that “all a college must do to boost enrollments is tap into a student’s personal aspirations and cultivate overconfidence with a little courage and persuasion” (Woods). Woods took on the persona of a persona of a high-school graduate in his early 30s who wanted a new job and had dreams of becoming a corporate executive. “The premise of the experiment was simple: How would colleges respond to a student like me? In almost all cases, I filled out an online form, which asked for my name, contact information, and level of education and work experience. Whenever possible, I included the following message: "i want to get MBa but i only graduated highshol in many years ago in 1992 i work contruction now can you help me?"” (Woods) Woods submitted the applications and waited for a month. He received at least three responses from different for-profit colleges, including big names such as: ITT Technical Institute, Corinthian College (which has closed many of its doors), and the University of Phoenix. Among these responses, Woods identified strategies for-profit colleges used to persuade him.
                        The "guidance counselors" employed four basic sales themes: opportunity, ease,                             encouragement, and shame … In a few cases, the advisers asked rhetorical                                     questions about whether I was happy or proud of what I do. Olympia's letter                                     asked, "When someone asks where you work, are you embarrassed to answer? Do                you dream of more? Take the next step: Enroll." (Woods).
            Woods closes with this, “Anyone interested in pursuing a professional career needs a realistic picture of the financial risks involved, as well as the time, patience, and hard work required for success. Many for-profit colleges are offering just the opposite … they inflate the high hopes of many students who may be unlikely to achieve the promised successes.” Author, Joshua Woods, complicates Carey’s argument of “traditional institutions having very little evidence,” by performing his own research on for-profit colleges, which leads to the conclusion that for-profit universities are misleading their potential students by using rhetorical marketing tactics such as guilt-tripping. Again, there’s more evidence against for-profits besides the issue of accreditation. Woods personally investigated for-profit institutions and came up with a whole article’s worth of evidence – mind you, on the same website Carey published his own article.
            All these outside sources support the first half of Carey’s claims. For-profit institutions are a growing problem, especially when it comes to the sheer amount of taxpayer dollars going into. As for the other half of Carey’s claims, they are complicated by the large amount of evidence given in these sources against for-profits. Suggestions to send fraudulent income, aggressive language, and rhetorical encouragement and shame are all tactics used by for-profit colleges to recruit students.
            Carey seems to skimp out on details when it comes to a few of his claims, which is a weakness in his article. While there’s a lot of information on one of the for-profit industry’s leaders Michael Clifford, there’s not a lot about what’s making for-profits such a big deal aside from how much money they’re taking. Nowhere in Carey’s article does it talk about those being affected the most by for-profits – particularly the students and taxpayers. While “Why Do You Think They’re Called For-Profit Colleges?” is a great introduction to the for-profit industry, I believe it doesn’t give the reader a complete understanding of what for-profits do that’s making such a great big media fuss.



Works Cited
·         Excerpts from the Government Accountability Report on For-Profit Universities, August 4, 2010. “For Profit Colleges: Undercover Testing Finds Colleges Encouraged Fraud and Engaged in Deceptive and Questionable Marketing Practices.”
·         Project Rose 2010 Revealed, 2010, David Pauldine, DeVry University, Bob Cohen, and CCA.
·         “Opportunity, Ease, Encouragement, and Shame: a Short Course in Pitching For-Profit Education.” Joshua Woods. January 13, 2006. Chronicle of Higher Education,
·         "About GAO." U.S. GAO -. N.p., n.d. Web. 27 Oct. 2014. <http://www.gao.gov/about/index.html>.

·         Carey, Kevin. "Why Do You Think They're Called For-Profit Colleges?" The Chronicle of Higher Education. N.p., 25 July 2010. Web. 27 Oct. 2014. <http://chronicle.com/article/Why-Do-You-Think-Theyre/123660/>.

Tuesday, October 14, 2014

Prospective Prospectus

Due to formatting issues, I have attached the Microsoft Word version of my Prospectus here.

I  will be bringing a physical copy, as always.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Elements, Comments, and Complications

Identify an element in “For-Profit Colleges Deserve Some Respect,” by Seiden that extends, complicates, challenges, qualifies or illustrates a claim (or piece of evidence) in Carey.

Seiden's "Key Criticisms of the Industry", particularly the ones about student drop-out rates and aggressive marketing can extend the claims made in paragraph five of Carey's piece.

Identify an element in For-Profit Colleges, Vulnerable G.I.’s,” by Holly Perteaus that extends, complicates, challenges, qualifies or illustrates a claim (or piece of evidence) in Carey.

Perteaus' mentioning of the funds recieved via military education benefits supports Carey's paragraph four, which talks about For-Profits' sources of capital.

Find a quote from one or two comments that extends, complicates, challenges or illustrates a claim (or piece of evidence) in Carey.

This whole comment challenges Carey's "filling the void" metaphor.


Quoted by Erin Moore
I have been a student with Ashford for almost four months now, and I am going to be withdrawing. I knew something was wrong when I had to find out that there was going to be a technology fee of $1,247.00 from another student on the University’s facebook page. This fee was going to be taken from my first stipend check, and my financial aid adviser did not tell me about it at all. I asked at least two times if there were going to be any fees for anything at all and I was told NO.
I made a total of four calls and 3 emails to my financial aid adviser about the fee. After 2 1/2 weeks, I finally get a call. When I asked why I was not told about the technology fee, I was told, “This is outlined in the student handbook”. My jaw just about dropped. Well, of course, I should have sat down and read the entirety of the handbook, however, when I asked if there were going to be any fees, the FA’s job IS to inform me of any and all fees. Period. Regardless of where they put it in writing, the FA should have told me. So after that issue, I didn’t feel like I could trust Ashford, and since then I have had a gnawing feeling in my stomach about going to school here.
When I posed a complaint on the Ashford facebook page, I was told by a group of “regulars” that post there every day that it was MY problem that I didn’t know there was a tech fee, and that it was in the student handbook. I was quite curious about the fact that these 3 posters on facebook were parroting exactly what the FA had told me on the phone. So I started to watch the page a little, and I noticed something fishy. That these 3 posters claimed to be students, all having gotten their Bachelor’s and were all working toward a Masters but they seemed to have time to post and field complaints such as mine all day long. This is not an exaggeration. Any time a student posted a complaint about FA, they were were right there, answering the question and defending Ashford’s policies. I have seen these people out and out BLAME the student who complained in the first place. The other day I noted a woman who said she started in March 2012, and that as of June 2012, still has not received a stipend on the 100% plan. She stated she needed the money to get a laptop for school. Shortly after, the group of 3 chime in and start accusing her that she’s in school just for the stipend checks. It was awful. After watching these 3 for sometime, I have come to the conclusion that they are NOT Ashford students. They are hired employees to pose as students on the facebook site to answer and defend Ashford’s policies. It’s just uncanny, and it’s so obvious what is taking place.
Aside from this, I’m withdrawing and going to a brick and mortar school. I’m done with the ridiculous discussion posting assignments each week, where I have to post among students who are genuinely illiterate and can barely spell and write in complete sentences. In my ENG121 course, my instructor teaches students in her “guidance” with a sock monkey puppet on youtube video with her or her husband making a “muppet voice”.
I’m done with the dishonesty and the silliness.

Saturday, October 4, 2014

"Light" Homework


Gerald Lappay

RWS 100

Professor Werry

October 4, 2014

"Light" Homework

1. List the three main claims Carey gives in the first half of the text suggesting there are problems with for-profit universities, and kinds of the evidence provided for each claim (this can be a list, with just a sentence for each claim and type of evidence).
  • Claim 1: For-profit colleges obtain large amounts of money from the federal government. (Pell Grants & Subsidized Loans, 90/10 Rule, Default Rates)
  • Claim 2: Many students who attend for-profits end up defaulting. (Large default rates, Clifford interview, "Nunn hearings on steroids")
  • Claim 3: For-profits are relatively new, but rapidly growing ("mom-and-pop trade schools", "few years ago")
2. List the three main claims Carey gives in the second half of the text suggesting public universities have caused many of the problems for profits seek to remedy.
  • Claim 1: For-profits make up for what traditional higher institutions lack ("Gilded city-states", "Fast developing methods", For-profits still have accreditation) 
  • Claim 2: Traditional universities lack evidence to bash for-profits.
  • Claim 3: "Who else was willing to save them?"
3. List one element of Carey's  text you would like to investigate - a claim, some evidence, a strategy, etc.


  • I'd like to investigate some sob-stories from victims of these for-profits. I intend to use my knowledge about federal jargon from my 12th grade statistics class in my paper.

Thursday, October 2, 2014

Because We Call Them For-Profit Colleges, Duh!

Gerald Lappay

RWS 100
Professor Werry
October 2, 2014
“Because We Call Them For-Profit Colleges, Duh!”
What seems to be Carey’s overall argument?
I believe Carey’s overall argument is that while for-profit colleges, from a moral standpoint, are wrong, they fill the gaps of what traditional education leave behind. I don’t believe many traditional universities offer what the degrees for-profits do, mainly in the freelancing, arts, and technology fields; and while for-profits are outrageously overpriced, you can’t beat them when it comes to accessibility. Accessibility would be the key word to differentiate between for-profits and traditional institutes of higher education, and Carey highlights how accessible for-profits can be; with several of them littering highway exits and professors being available online.
List three major claims and the evidence Carey uses to support these claims.
Claim #1: For-profits and their investors make a lot of money. The first ten paragraphs identify the morally bad yet financially brilliant concept of for-profit colleges. Carey recycles the statistics frequently pulled by the media, so the reader understands the sheer amount of money for-profits are taking from the federal reserve. “[The University of] Phoenix alone is on pace to reap $1-billion from Pell Grants this year, along with $4-billion from federal loans. A quarter of all federal aid goes to for-profits, while they enroll only 10 percent of students” (Paragraph 4).
Claim #2: Michael Clifford, one of the leaders in the for-profit industry, concedes that the for-profit industry is being abused. Carey states this in the very beginning of paragraph 8. “Clifford will concede, in the abstract, to abuses in the for-profit industry” (8). I would imagine Clifford means that too many people are milking money from the for-profit industry, but Carey isn’t specific enough in what kind of abuse for-profits are taking.
Claim #3: For-profits are more accessible compared to traditional institutions.  Like all traditional institutions, most for-profits also have regional accreditation. An accredited institution a few miles away from a highway exit near your home is more convenient to attend, in comparison to an institution like San Diego State University. I doubt you would have to pay any kind of housing or service fees. One can still learn from the comfort of his or her home using the internet; and obtain attractive degrees for-profits offer such as design and computer fields -- which I doubt San Diego State offers.
Do any parts of his text seem particularly persuasive? Do any claims seem unsupported?

Carey is persuasive when he first pulls in the reader with how “wrong” for-profits can be. He’s also persuasive when he uses figurative language, like in paragraph 16. “For profits fill a void left by traditional institutions that once believed their world was constant” (16). Some of his claims, such as the Wal-Mart deal in paragraph 13 and the abuse of the for-profit industry go unexplained, which leaves me wondering with the typical how and why questions.